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Piano Playing

I will play this piano
Like you played my heart.

Each key an emotion,
A deep feeling of mine.

I will start as soft as Spring rain,
Or gentle kisses in the dark.

But I will finish with like a storm -
Or harsh words, whispered too readily.

For each note ended broken,
And every key was abused.

As I realized your lies,
As my feelings were crushed.

So I’m playing this piano,
As you played with me.

Gentle kisses and loving whispers,
To hurtful words and careless thoughts.

With bloody, trembling fingers,
And a broken, dying heart.
©2008-2009 *Jenna-Rose
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Piano Playing

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I really have no idea.

*no critiques please

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wonderful work hun :love:

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so beautiful :thumbsup:

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:iconjenna-rose:
Thank you sweety :D

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Thank you dear :aww:

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Nicely done, some wonderful symbolism. :+fav:

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Thanks very much!
I don't know where it came from :shrug:

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:iconequinedanae:
Wow! I L-O-V-E this piece. It's beautiful! Especially the opening:

I will play this piano
Like you played my heart.


Amazing job!
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Thank you so much :aww: I'm glad you like it.

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Whatever you celebrate, have a Happy Holiday!
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Im a pianist...I love how well this was written.
Beautiful.
-Brightside

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"I play dead"

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